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Tuesday, March 31, 2015

APA Paper with results

I finished the APA Paper with the results section. The link is below:

APA Paper with Results

It was difficult to keep it short, but I think what I said is clear. I look forward to the critique.

Natalia Beardsley critiqued my paper and gave me constructive feedback. Click on the link below to see her suggestions. She also sent me an email outlining her suggestions and why. It was extremely helpful and clarified so much for me.

APA Paper and Results with suggested corrections

When reading through the APA guidelines it was often difficult to understand their examples. You really have to pay attention to the details and read through it all more than once. Natalia obviously has a knack for noticing the details and it helped me to have her check my paper. I was glad she pointed out that my hypothesis sounded like it was based on opinion rather than any study and she suggested I look for an article or paper to back it up. Good idea! Even if it is someone else's "opinion," it would help to show researchers why we came up with the hypothesis in the first place.


Click on the link below to see the corrected copy of the APA paper with Results.

Corrected APA Paper with Results

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